FROM THESE EYES SEE
What do I dream, look into my eyes, what do I see,
To you are my eyes beautiful, what do your eyes see.?
My eyes shine in the light, they’re a color of brown,
A face I wear but you do not see, you will not see me.
From these eyes seen are amazing and wonderful things,
In my time there have been tears shown to you, why.?
These eyes take in all that will appear before them,
Do you know me, have you seen me before.?
Keith Garrett
keithgarrettpoetry 
I like the line “A face I wear…but, you will not see…”. This is an excellent metaphor.
Thanks for reading
On Tue, Aug 16, 2016 at 12:40 PM, keithgarrettpoetry wrote:
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I agree with Marie here, that line in particular stood out to me. Very well worded. Thank you for writing.
Thanks for the comment Rachel, and hope to see you when you have the time.
Thanks for reading
On Sun, Aug 21, 2016 at 7:44 PM, keithgarrettpoetry wrote:
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Marvelous