EYES IN THE NIGHT
What is it that lives beyond the light of day,
Lurks, wanders in the dark, exists in the night.
Search for food, a task that’s taken much for granted,
While we slumber in silence, eyes in the night survive.
Many are they that fly, quietly on the prowl this night,
Over fences there are the ones that move carefully, slowly.
Crawling along the ground, there’s a fight to see the morning light,
Scraps of food, nourishment for a chance to do it all over again.
So many eyes in the night, traveling along, the hunter or the hunted,
Big over the small, stronger defeats the weak, faster may just escape,
Eyes in the night, for many could be a scary sight, on this dark night.
Keith Garrett
Now thats a poem
great work
The way of the world and survival. Nicely done!
Thanks for readng
On Thu, Aug 3, 2017 at 10:07 AM, keithgarrettpoetry wrote:
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Good imagery I would love to see more “power words”, for example: ravenous, tearing, and maybe a dash of terrible. These are examples of words that evoke a strong emotional reaction. I like your work
Thanks so much for your thoughts.
On Tue, Apr 7, 2020 at 1:22 PM keithgarrettpoetry wrote:
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