I’VE BEEN THINKING

I thought i’d call to you and talk awhile,

I’m sitting here alone, I’ve been thinking.

What can i do to make this world a better place,

Let go of anger and sometimes terrible thoughts.

Do not waste this time that I’ve been given,

Smile and say hello to a passerby.

Lend a hand to a less fortunate soul,

Put a little trust in man, this I’ve been told.

Do not take a life, be there for a friend,

Teach a child right from wrong.

Love as much as you can, hate is not a gift in hand,

Do not steal or act in violence,

I’ve been thinking god, I just needed you to listen.

Keith Garrett

256 thoughts on “I’VE BEEN THINKING

  1. I like your poem, and you’ve shared some thoughts I feel, too. Life is in the details — the small stuff. A kind word, a ready warm smile, the recognition that as humans we’re all in the same shaky boat, having and caring about friends, loving our families — we can change the world one word, one smile, on embrace at a time.

  2. Nice.. I prefer your work when you don’t try to rhyme, which gives the poem a stilted quality. I think you are at your best as a poet when you speak in a more natural voice. Are you on Google +? There are poetry groups there where you can put your work up for discussion and comment..

  3. Wonderful aspiration, Keith, but above all , do not waste the time you have been given. Thank you for a beautiful and thoughtful poem.

  4. I like this poem. It is the kind of poem that I would write. The sentiments expressed for definite. I like your writing style. It is easy on the eye and on the mind. Thanks for liking an Irish Rave by the way

  5. Thanks for visiting my page. I do like this poem – there are too few people thinking about others, and far too many who are selfish and grasping. It’s a bit like reading the beatitudes

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